Comments:Thai police, protesters in violent clashes; at least one dead
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|Comments from feedback form - ""Protesters in Thailand clashe..."||2||06:30, 29 April 2010|
|Comments from feedback form - "Good!"||0||06:26, 29 April 2010|
"Protesters in Thailand clashed today" ?? No, it was yesterday, Wednesday; keep in mind you are writing for a world-wide audience. And far too many commas... Doesn't name the location and road like real news articles have.
It was not YESTERDAY! Remember, Thailand is on the other side of the date line! It is TOMORROW there now.