Talk:British male gymnasts pick up medal despite last-minute appeal by Japan
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Revision 1570847 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:11, 31 July 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Manually checked each source for copyright doing both a manual scan and duplication detector. Newsworthiness is clearly established in the first paragraph. I think the neutrality is fine in that there isn't any obvious boosterism of any team that isn't supported by sources. Sources support all facts in the article. Stylistically, it all appears to be in active voice. There are places where I feel the prose could probably flow better but every place I'd try to combine sentence I can't because of the rest of the sentence. Thus leaving it alone and assuming it is a stylistic, wording preference. Image is properly credited. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1570847 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:11, 31 July 2012 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Manually checked each source for copyright doing both a manual scan and duplication detector. Newsworthiness is clearly established in the first paragraph. I think the neutrality is fine in that there isn't any obvious boosterism of any team that isn't supported by sources. Sources support all facts in the article. Stylistically, it all appears to be in active voice. There are places where I feel the prose could probably flow better but every place I'd try to combine sentence I can't because of the rest of the sentence. Thus leaving it alone and assuming it is a stylistic, wording preference. Image is properly credited. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Title[edit]
Doesn't this article have a rather British-centric title? It's the appeal that makes it newsworthy, but the British gymnasts taking the medal leads the headline; 'despite'. --78.149.106.40 (talk) 01:02, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
Ukrainians[edit]
They're the ones who really lost out... AnonMoos (talk) 01:21, 1 August 2012 (UTC)