Talk:Brothers Sunshine Coast pick up first win in senior rugby at Australia's University of the Sunshine Coast

Interview transcript

00:00:00:07 - 00:00:01:26
Patrick Gillett
How was this one for you guys?

00:00:01:26 - 00:00:11:22
Kalani O'Neill 
It was bloddy good. Conditions could've been better, [it was] a bit wet out there. But we played as a team, and got the W [which] was fortunate. [We] had a real good game in the end.

00:00:11:22 - 00:00:21:45
Patrick Gillett
[inaudible]

00:00:22:02 - 00:00:32:11
Kalani O'Neill 
It felt like that we finally connected as a team like last few matches [we've] been all over the place, but this time we finally gelled together as a team, connected as a unit [and] executed really well.

00:00:32:11 - 00:00:34:35
Patrick Gillett
Happy to get that first win of the season?

00:00:34:35 - 00:00:39:00
Kalani O'Neill 
Yeah, absolutely. We've got 12 more round to go. So may as well aim high so may and keep going for them.

00:00:39:31 - 00:00:42:21
Patrick Gillett
What do you learn from this first win?

00:00:42:21 - 00:00:53:17
Kalani O'Neill 
We'll build on our attack. We'll build on more of our attack sequences. Try to get into those forwards more. Get that defense and just aim to work on what we played from today.

00:00:53:17 - 00:00:54:30
Patrick Gillett
Who've you got next?

00:00:54:30 - 00:01:03:18
Kalani O'Neill 
Who we got next. Believe it's Gympie next week. Yeah. At Gympie I'm pretty sure. Yeah. Should be good.

00:01:03:18 - 00:01:05:36
Patrick Gillett
Any special preparation for [that one] or just keep doing what we're doing what you've been working on?

00:01:06:04 - 00:01:14:24
Kalani O'Neill 
Just keep doing what we've working on, Get to training. Just keep going and just play hard and play our best

00:01:14:24 - 00:01:16:07
Patrick Gillett
Who stood out for you guys today?

00:01:16:07 - 00:01:37:43
Kalani O'Neill 
In our team? I['d] like to call out Jacko Jackson one of our forwards. Yeah, he always had intensity the whole game. I'm always... this [person] right here Jacko... always that intensity the whole game. Always followed up. Picked out a player and took him down. Out the backs, another Jack. Just kept going in the corners just making space for us and getting us out there.

00:01:39:24 - 00:01:40:29
Patrick Gillett
Any thing else?

00:01:40:29 - 00:01:46:36
Kalani O'Neill 
Nothing else. We played well as a team and I believe that we'll go up from here.

--RockerballAustralia contribs 01:56, 30 April 2022 (UTC) Revised --RockerballAustralia contribs 06:32, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

In many parts inaccurate. Please revise, including for the file's captions. JJLiu112 (talk) 05:09, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

I do enough of these that some errors escape my notice. I'll revise this transcript post below. RockerballAustralia contribs 06:15, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Also, thank you for picking this up. RockerballAustralia contribs 06:15, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Original reporting notes

University v Brothers

• Arrived at the University of the Sunshine Coast rugby fields at about 6:40pm local time (8:40am UTC)
• Noted that the main field didn't have it's lights on. The University may have closed the field.
• Game was played on the back field.
• Brothers opened the scoring about 25 minutes into the first half with a try. The subsequent conversion attempt was unsuccessful.
• University drew level about 10 minutes into the second half with thier own try and missed conversion attempt.
• Brothers scored their second try about 15 minutes later. The conversion attempt was unsuccessful.

--RockerballAustralia contribs 23:45, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

Should have put in that it was Friday night. --RockerballAustralia contribs 01:32, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

I think the state of my feet – picture available at File:Reporters feet 2022-04-29 21.41.12.jpg – may tell you how wet the ground was --RockerballAustralia contribs

Results were posted to Facebook by the Sunshine Coast Rugby Union. Sunshine Coast Rugby Union. "Results from Round 4" — Facebook, May 2, 2022 (English) --RockerballAustralia contribs 04:18, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4675654 [Not ready]

Revision 4675654 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:21, 1 May 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Doesn't meet the basic style requirements Comments by reviewer: Trying to do a quick review so we don't fall into the 'stale' rabbit hole, and give time for fixes. Please expand the prose. Can you explain what league these teams play in? Anything about the game itself? Even for a photo essay, I think we need 100 words (captions not included). What is the Instagram link for? I hardly think it can be considered a reliable source. The lede doesn't even say when this happened. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4675654 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:21, 1 May 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Doesn't meet the basic style requirements Comments by reviewer: Trying to do a quick review so we don't fall into the 'stale' rabbit hole, and give time for fixes. Please expand the prose. Can you explain what league these teams play in? Anything about the game itself? Even for a photo essay, I think we need 100 words (captions not included). What is the Instagram link for? I hardly think it can be considered a reliable source. The lede doesn't even say when this happened. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Thanks for the quick review. That 'stale' rabbit hole can be very annoying.

Of the things mentioned in the review;

Please expand the prose. Expanded but still working on style.

Can you explain what league these teams play in? Done

Anything about the game itself? Not much to say about the actual game play. It was played on a field that almost resembled a big puddle. The game play reflected that.

Even for a photo essay, I think we need 100 words (captions not included).

What is the Instagram link for? I hardly think it can be considered a reliable source. The specific link was to verify the win. It's a post from the club involved. Anyway, link removed.

--RockerballAustralia contribs 02:12, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Should be good the go now. --RockerballAustralia contribs 02:50, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

I think I'd be considered a contributor now given my direct editing. @SVTCobra: please! JJLiu112 (talk) 05:10, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

I'll try and get to this later today if no-one has by then! LivelyRatification (talk) 23:33, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

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