Talk:Councillors from Taichung City don't apologize about bully scandal at 2007 Baseball World Cup

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Who the heck allowed this to be published!? The whole series of baseball world cup articles seems to have been put through a free online translator.

NOT a free online translator. Just because I have only basic level on translating English, If you DON'T LIKE, PLEASE NOMINATE TO DELETE ALL MY PUBLISHED SERIES, and I'll QUIT the AR!!!!! Brock contact... 11:24, 24 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit[edit]

Hi Brock, I did some copy-editing. I removed this "With those words above, it revealed the corruption and decay of governmental people, who didn't respect on citizens and baseball fans in Taiwan." because drawing a conclusion such as this is a violation of WN:NPOV, we should just provide facts and let the readers draw their own conclusions.

But more importantly, what is the scandal of the "Bully Councillors"? The article does not mention what the councillors are accused of doing. This is a very important piece that is missing. And again, please check that I got my other changes right. Cheers, --SVTCobra 15:35, 27 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, and please ignore the rude comment from the Anon above. --SVTCobra 17:20, 27 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
In fact, "Bully Councilors" was called by local people in Taiwan b/c they were suspected on abusing privileges by accompanying their supporters without any tickets. The policy on entrance should be "one ticket by one person, not one ticket by two or more persons." Brock contact... 17:42, 27 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]