Talk:Dominique Strauss-Kahn resigns as head of IMF
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Revision 1233475 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:02, 19 May 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Room to improve. Remember, write actively rather than passively. See Wikinews:SG#Six_tips_on_better_writing for more. I challenge the author to fix passive voice in the second sentence, the fourth paragraph and the last sentence. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
