Talk:Dungeons & Dragons co-creator Dave Arneson dies

The entire latter paragraph about D&D being a tabletop RPG, the evolution of RPGs, etc. doesn't really belong in Arneson's obituary. More about Arneson himself should be found instead. John Darrow (talk) 00:50, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Agreed, especially as the obit isn't that long now. Also the dice image isn't really needed. I don't what it ads. Also this page needs the Obits infobox. Calebrw (talk) 14:18, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Done Image removed, sidebar added. tempodivalse 14:20, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

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Intergration of other story

Even though normally I wouldn't, I thought that this would be a good use of post publication addition as additions come from a prepared story and adds to the current story, so I cited the changes. Calebrw (talk) 14:18, 13 April 2009 (UTC)