Talk:Fuzlullah named Pakistan's new Taliban leader
Review of revision 2128937 [Not ready][edit]
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Revision 2128937 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:43, 7 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article does not establish what recent event it is reporting on. The only date mentioned in the article lede is a week old, which means it is no longer fresh. The lead needs to be rewritten to convey a better sense of time and why this is news now. This can be done by including words like today or yesterday. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 2128937 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:43, 7 November 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article does not establish what recent event it is reporting on. The only date mentioned in the article lede is a week old, which means it is no longer fresh. The lead needs to be rewritten to convey a better sense of time and why this is news now. This can be done by including words like today or yesterday. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 2130426 [Passed][edit]
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