Talk:Hawaiian Representative Neil Abercrombie resigns

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Review of revision 921394 [Failed][edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 921394 of this article has been reviewed by Benny the mascot (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:10, 12 December 2009 (UTC).
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  • Verifiability: Symbol question.svg Not ready: "He announced his candidacy for the position of Hawaii's governor on March 9, 2009. No replacement has been named at this time. - First of all, this needs to be sourced. Also, replacements for representatives are elected, not "chosen".
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Review of revision 921620 [Passed][edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 921620 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:19, 12 December 2009 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: Comments made in prior review were not addressed prior to resubmission!

  1. A political party may chose a preferred candidate for a post; as was, to me, clear in the prior review comments, that does not circumvent the actual election.
  2. As it was the article could have been failed on style; no categories were present.
  3. An additional source had been added, It was falsely labelled with today's date, not the actual publication date clearly listed on it.
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