Talk:Heavy Rain and Floods in Sri Lanka: Over 50,000 Families Affected
From Wikinews, the free news source you can write!
Contents |
[edit] New title/Headline (typo 50 0000)
Title was missing a comma in 50,000. (reworked the title)
[edit] Wording (reworked)
"The western, some parts of southern and north-eastern provinces were among the worst hit areas." "worst hit" was reworked.
"These floods are a bitter blow to the victims of last year’s tsunami living in temporary shelters specially in the north-eastern province." "bitter blow to the victims" was reworked
"The newly elected president has torn apart the agreement signed by the former president and the Tamil tiger rebels to share the aid between them." "...the aid between them." was reworked for better understanding.
[edit] Intext links
Links were not set by the wiki intext.
[edit] Gave a general location
Gave a general location of Sri Lanka, according to Geography of Sri Lanka
