Talk:Man killed over Halloween hat in London, England
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[edit] Review of revision 906633 [Passed]
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Revision 906633 of this article has been reviewed by The New Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Made a few copyedits. --The New Mikemoral ♪♫ 00:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
"A man was what? to death"? First review? It's not a rubber stamp - fix grammar, spelling, look for errors like this first. --Brian McNeil / talk 00:04, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. Tempodivalse [talk] 00:07, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
