Talk:Philippines is culling 6500 hogs after Reston ebolavirus outbreak

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I CREATED this interesting news article on ERV which is killing our hog industry and exports. I am Philippines Judge Florentino Floro, having registered with Wikinews on December 3, 2008, and is a Wikinews:Editor as of January 12, 2009.

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Other sources:[1]Manila to slaughter 6,000 pigs to stop Ebola spread

[2]Philippines to cull 6,000 hogs to stamp out Ebola-Reston virus [3]Inspection widened after spread of Ebola strain [4]Philippine pig-farmer infected with ebola virus [5]6,000 pigs ordered killed amid Ebola Reston virus scare [6]More hog farms watched for ebola virus --Florentino Floro (talk) 09:46, 24 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[7]6,000 Bulacan pigs face culling over Ebola virus [8]State to undertake first large-scale animal culling [9]6,000 pigs to be killed in war against ebola [10]Virus scare hits Asia--Florentino Floro (talk) 11:09, 24 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Feb 25 sources:

[11] Video QTV: Method in burning of 6,000 pigs still being finalized - 02/25/2009 [12] Govt agencies meeting over burning of 6,000 pigs in Bulacan 02/25/2009--Florentino Floro (talk) 07:54, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[13]'Hot meat' seized in Pasay City

[14]300 kilos of tainted meat seized in Pasay - report 02/25/2009--Florentino Floro (talk) 07:58, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[15] QTV: Nearly 3 tons of tainted meat seized at Balintawak Market 02/26/2009--Florentino Floro (talk) 09:33, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[16]Philippines to cull 6,000 pigs --Florentino Floro (talk) 11:43, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

[17]QTV: 6,000 infected pigs to be stunned, burned, buried 02/27/2009--Florentino Floro (talk) 05:16, 28 February 2009 (UTC)--Florentino Floro (talk) 06:03, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Review[edit]

Revision 775482 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:20, 1 March 2009 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not ready: "After consulting with various environment and animal welfare groups, local authorities have decided to use" copyvio [18]. "received reports of sick hogs and early slaughtering from Babatngon, Tacloban City, Alangalang, Sta. Fe, Palo, Pastrana, Dagami, Burauen, Tabontabon, Lapaz, Mayorga, and Abuyog in Leyte; Sogod in Southern Leyte; Catbalogan, Calbiga, Daram, and Sta. Rita in Samar; and Lope de Vega in Northern Samar" copyvio [19]. "African strains kill 50 percent to 90 percent of those infected through lethal bleeding and organ failure" copyvio [20]
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: "There is ongoing ... viral transmission" not sourced. "147 human samples" no source. "As a precautionary ... study the virus". "There is no salmonella outbreak in Eastern Visayas" no source, also no end quote.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 04:20, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 775482 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:20, 1 March 2009 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not ready: "After consulting with various environment and animal welfare groups, local authorities have decided to use" copyvio [21]. "received reports of sick hogs and early slaughtering from Babatngon, Tacloban City, Alangalang, Sta. Fe, Palo, Pastrana, Dagami, Burauen, Tabontabon, Lapaz, Mayorga, and Abuyog in Leyte; Sogod in Southern Leyte; Catbalogan, Calbiga, Daram, and Sta. Rita in Samar; and Lope de Vega in Northern Samar" copyvio [22]. "African strains kill 50 percent to 90 percent of those infected through lethal bleeding and organ failure" copyvio [23]
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: "There is ongoing ... viral transmission" not sourced. "147 human samples" no source. "As a precautionary ... study the virus". "There is no salmonella outbreak in Eastern Visayas" no source, also no end quote.
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 04:20, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

2nd Review[edit]

I added 2 sources to back up the facts and checked removed copy vios. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 06:02, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

2nd Review failed[edit]

Despite its status as a Level-4 organism, the Reston ebolavirus is non-pathogenic to humans and is only mildly fatal to monkeys; the perception of its lethality was skewed due to the monkey's coinfection with Simian hemorrhagic fever virus (SHFV). = verbatim cut and paste from en.wikipedia article w:Reston ebolavirus, seemingly without attribution in sources or any modification/paraphrasing to the wording. Further, why cut and paste from the en.wikipedia article for this info, instead of simply doing the actual research into the sources cited at the end of the sentences in that wiki article? Cirt (talk) 06:24, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

3rd review[edit]

I changed the part which failed with the official statement from our DOH: "Unlike the three subtypes, Zaire, Sudan and Ivory Coast, which can cause hemorrhagic symptoms, Reston does not. There has been no evidence that Reston can cause significant illness in humans. When Reston was previously found in monkeys, few animal handlers were infected but only one had very mild symptoms," the Philippine Department of Health (DOH) official website statement on the virus announced.[24] Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 08:10, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

To Reviewers[edit]

See the first and second reviews. If there were this many instances of blatant copyvio in the prior reviews, how many other instances of blatant copyvio are present in this article? Please be cautious when doing the review. Thanks, Cirt (talk) 09:19, 1 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The culling slowly began with only 442 pigs killed Sunday[edit]

I had updated this BIG and landmark reston virus which for the first time in world history affected 6 humans since this virus appeared from Philippine monkeys in 1989. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 05:54, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Funny news[edit]

Oh my God, in all the news I created this is the FUNNIEST: after pains in writing this article, I was shocked that the stun gun malfunctioned: so they agreed to use cal 32 pistol. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 08:23, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[25][reply]

Much Funnier, policemen used .22 cal. and they have no guns[edit]

First they protested the inhumane shooting, now, due to bad captive pistols, they said .32 caliber handguns, but they don't have even one. So, 12 policemen were ordered to shoot with .22 cal guns. How can we not laugh at this news. It is becoming funny daily. So reality and money plus funds, spell the difference to these animal rights lovers. I added these sources and took off the old ones in the main article transferring here:

http://www.abs-cbnnews.com/nation/regions/03/03/09/ebola-infected-pigs-shot-if-stunning-fails [26]QTV: Culled pigs in Bulacan hog farm reaches 1,237 - 03/03/2009 [27]Faulty stun gun stalls pig depopulation By Dino Balabo Updated March 03, 2009 --Florentino Floro (talk) 06:47, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Review revision 777791[edit]

Revision 777791 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:25, 6 March 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I did my best with this. I am at the very least confident that there is no actionable libel or slander within this article. --SVTCobra 02:25, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 777791 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:25, 6 March 2009 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I did my best with this. I am at the very least confident that there is no actionable libel or slander within this article. --SVTCobra 02:25, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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