Talk:Strongest tornado since 1983 strikes Los Angeles County, California
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Revision 4718002 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:48, 27 March 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @TechDevil2023: Good work on a first article! It appeared text was copied, then "scuffed up", which introduces problems of copyright and plagiary. Articles need to be written in your own words, which using a few synonyms alone cannot do, and editing to address this took up the bulk of the review. This may be of help. See the edit history for more fixes, such as adding categories, crediting images, internationalizing, source formatting, and headline style. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4718002 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:48, 27 March 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @TechDevil2023: Good work on a first article! It appeared text was copied, then "scuffed up", which introduces problems of copyright and plagiary. Articles need to be written in your own words, which using a few synonyms alone cannot do, and editing to address this took up the bulk of the review. This may be of help. See the edit history for more fixes, such as adding categories, crediting images, internationalizing, source formatting, and headline style. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- Also, note the tornado was not only in Montebello. That was simply where it touched down, it tore through Los Angeles as well. --Heavy Water (talk) 14:54, 27 March 2023 (UTC)