Talk:Ten dead in Alabama shooting

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Grammar[edit]

This sentence is awkward.

  • According to a report given by the Alabama state Senator Harri Anne Smith, who represents Geneva County to CNN she has said "He was shooting at just ordinary people going about their business".

SriMesh | talk 18:04, 11 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments by reviewer: Did some English fixing, otherwise good. R.T. 20:27, 11 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Comments by reviewer: Did some English fixing, otherwise good. R.T. 20:27, 11 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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