Talk:US government to resume Haiti evacuations

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Review of revision 949172 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 949172 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 06:43, 1 February 2010 (UTC).
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Comments by reviewer: There are no wikilinks, either local or to Wikipedia, no categories. We don't use titles such as Mr. in articles, spaces are missing. Plus some paragraphs just have way too much information in them, split them up. Please go back and make these changes before submitting for review again.

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Review of revision 949902 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 949902 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:47, 2 February 2010 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: Note copyedit/style changes made; most small details in WN:SG and Strunk's

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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