User talk:Admiral Norton
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- It's looking good. I would suggest copy-editing it yourself and chopping it up into smaller paragraphs. For example, quotes should go in their own paragraph. A lot of the sentences can be split up into smaller ones too. That's probably just because you wrote it really fast. I would help you more but I've been working night and day on that HUGE piece for a week and I am just SO tired. Mike Halterman (talk) 11:05, 10 May 2009 (UTC)