User talk:Saqib Qayyum/Ramadan in most of Middle East countries begins Monday

Revision 687081 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:54, 1 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Not ready: Not really sure? How is this important? Obviously if you are Muslim, Ramadan is important - but you already know about it. Verifiability: Not ready: no sources NPOV: Not ready: Style: Not ready: Needs C/E & reviewing of WN:SG (Example: Dates), use of "Today" is a bad idea as you don't know when this will be published, no categories Comments by reviewer: Ramadan is a Middle East holiday now? That is what the first sentence says. Also this entire article is extremely confusing with going back and forth on all the countries and dates. Why not put it all into one cohesive list? --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 18:54, 1 September 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 687081 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:54, 1 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Not ready: Not really sure? How is this important? Obviously if you are Muslim, Ramadan is important - but you already know about it. Verifiability: Not ready: no sources NPOV: Not ready: Style: Not ready: Needs C/E & reviewing of WN:SG (Example: Dates), use of "Today" is a bad idea as you don't know when this will be published, no categories Comments by reviewer: Ramadan is a Middle East holiday now? That is what the first sentence says. Also this entire article is extremely confusing with going back and forth on all the countries and dates. Why not put it all into one cohesive list? --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 18:54, 1 September 2008 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.