Comments:Syrian citizen journalists risk death, targeted; city of Homs facing starvation
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|Syria||0||07:33, 26 February 2013|
|Comments from feedback form - "Bah, if this is supposed to be..."||1||22:08, 4 November 2012|
|Comments from feedback form - "Even though the style is still..."||2||03:11, 28 February 2012|
Bah, if this is supposed to be "unbiased" accounting, then it's better the corporate news. At least there the agenda is rather clear...
With the amount of work that went into copyediting and reviewing DragonFire1024's first submission in quite some time, I'm keen to know where you see "iffy" stylistic points.
A look at the edit history will show ~100 edits between review submission and publication.