Comments:Syrian citizen journalists risk death, targeted; city of Homs facing starvation
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Syria | 0 | 07:33, 26 February 2013 |
Comments from feedback form - "Bah, if this is supposed to be..." | 1 | 22:08, 4 November 2012 |
Comments from feedback form - "Even though the style is still..." | 2 | 03:11, 28 February 2012 |
Free Syrian Army is a terrorist because they kill many people in the univerysity of halep. They kill many people at the border of turkey and syria. So that the sustaining countries (such as usa) to the free syrian army are also terrorist countries.
Bah, if this is supposed to be "unbiased" accounting, then it's better the corporate news. At least there the agenda is rather clear...
I sincerely hope you're not conflating balance with bias.
With the amount of work that went into copyediting and reviewing DragonFire1024's first submission in quite some time, I'm keen to know where you see "iffy" stylistic points.
A look at the edit history will show ~100 edits between review submission and publication.