Talk:After 100 days, Deepwater Horizon oil spill still threatens Gulf coast

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It might save a bit of space by the omission of a comma if 'after 100 days' is put at the end. Kayau (talk · contribs) 11:57, 31 July 2010 (UTC)

Saves space, but your proposal doesn't seem to flow quite right to my ear. --InfantGorilla (talk) 13:13, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
What if 'continues to' is changed to 'still'? Kayau (talk · contribs) 14:32, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
'Still' is great, but I prefer it if 'After 100 days,' stays at the front: After 100 days, Deepwater Horizon oil spill still threatens Gulf coast. That is all I'll say. If no-one else chips in, trust your own judgement. --InfantGorilla (talk) 15:36, 31 July 2010 (UTC)
I'll wait another day and see if anyone objects then I'll move it to 'still', with after 100 days' still in front. Kayau (talk · contribs) 13:15, 1 August 2010 (UTC)