Talk:Anonymous muscle in on Canadian teen rape case
Add topicPreliminary reviewing comments
[edit]- Copyright check and manual check: [1][2][3][4][5][6]. No problems that I can see. Moved text to make sure quote was more properly attributed. --LauraHale (talk) 23:27, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
- Removed some prose that was not NPOV. Removed some sources that duplicated information. --LauraHale (talk) 23:59, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
Review of revision 1873588 [Passed]
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Revision 1873588 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:07, 12 April 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Too many sources that were not needed. These were removed. Author should be careful to avoid purple prose that distorts source meaning. (Panic, mysterious, putting hacktivist in single quotes.) Quotes should be more clearly attached to the text. It is worth looking at the article history to see what was done to get this to publish ready. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1873588 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:07, 12 April 2013 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Too many sources that were not needed. These were removed. Author should be careful to avoid purple prose that distorts source meaning. (Panic, mysterious, putting hacktivist in single quotes.) Quotes should be more clearly attached to the text. It is worth looking at the article history to see what was done to get this to publish ready. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |