Talk:Bomb on Jerusalem bus kills one, over 30 injured

Review of revision 1200416 [Failed]

Revision 1200416 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:32, 23 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: There are as many sources here as paragraphs - some of which are a single line long. I'm struggling to believe all of these are actually being used. Please trim back to only the sources required. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1200416 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:32, 23 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: There are as many sources here as paragraphs - some of which are a single line long. I'm struggling to believe all of these are actually being used. Please trim back to only the sources required. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1200820 [Failed]

Revision 1200820 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:59, 24 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Reiterating BRS' comments. Sources need to be trimmed back. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1200820 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:59, 24 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Reiterating BRS' comments. Sources need to be trimmed back. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1201163 [Failed]

Revision 1201163 of this article has been reviewed by Mono (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:30, 25 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Still too many sources. RM Yahoo News. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Needs heavy copyediting, wikilinks Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1201163 of this article has been reviewed by Mono (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:30, 25 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Still too many sources. RM Yahoo News. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Needs heavy copyediting, wikilinks Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1201966 [Failed]

Revision 1201966 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:59, 26 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None of the sources mentioned: "A young boy seen the package, suspected it was a bomb, and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it." Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1201966 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:59, 26 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None of the sources mentioned: "A young boy seen the package, suspected it was a bomb, and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it." Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1202198 [Passed]

Revision 1202198 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:29, 26 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Well that worked. Article now bordering staleness, but I believe its still okay. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1202198 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:29, 26 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Well that worked. Article now bordering staleness, but I believe its still okay. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.