Talk:Car bomb attack in Iraqi town, at least two dead and 45 injured

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Review of revision 1046367 [Passed][edit]

No verb in title[edit]

Come on guys: there needs to be a verb in title. Also, no "and." Something like Car bomb explodes, leaving 2 dead, 45 injured in Iraqi town." Thanks, Calebrw (talk) 09:35, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to add that this shouldn't be moved - the title isn't so bad that we ought to change it, given the mess that this creates. However, it really should have been done pre-publish. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 09:43, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good points, both. :) -- Cirt (talk) 15:14, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]