Talk:Celebrity bear Knut dies suddenly at the Berlin Zoo

Review of revision 1198364 [Failed]

Revision 1198364 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:28, 20 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: " He first drew attention when caregiver, Thomas Doerflein, temporarily lived at the zoo to be able to give the cub his bottle every two hours. Knut made daily public appearances in which his caregivers cuddled and played with the cub to the pleasure of thousands of visitors. Around the world fan clubs formed, including in the United States, Japan, and Germany. Fans were interested in all aspects of his life, including his battle with gaining weight and plans to relocate to a different zoo." is unsourced. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1198364 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:28, 20 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: See below NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: " He first drew attention when caregiver, Thomas Doerflein, temporarily lived at the zoo to be able to give the cub his bottle every two hours. Knut made daily public appearances in which his caregivers cuddled and played with the cub to the pleasure of thousands of visitors. Around the world fan clubs formed, including in the United States, Japan, and Germany. Fans were interested in all aspects of his life, including his battle with gaining weight and plans to relocate to a different zoo." is unsourced. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Sources given for statements in article

• Comments by reviewer:

"He first drew attention when caregiver, Thomas Doerflein, temporarily lived at the zoo to be able to give the cub his bottle every two hours. Knut made daily public appearances in which his caregivers cuddled and played with the cub to the pleasure of thousands of visitors. Around the world fan clubs formed, including in the United States, Japan, and Germany. Fans were interested in all aspects of his life, including his battle with gaining weight and plans to relocate to a different zoo." is unsourced.

• Reply: sources given:

Source:"Abandoned at birth on December 5, 2006, along with his twin brother, who only survived a couple of days, Knut first attracted attention when his main caregiver, Thomas Doerflein, camped out at the zoo to give the button-eyed cub his bottle every two hours. Doerflein cuddled and played with him at daily public appearances to the delight of thousands of people who came to watch." [1]

Source: "Fan clubs sprung up across the globe, including in Japan, the United States and Germany. Fans followed his every move, including his weight battle — he had a weakness for croissants — or plans to move to a different zoo." [2]

Note: I changed "caregivers" to "caregiver" to be more exact. Mattisse (talk) 10:07, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1198505 [Passed]

Revision 1198505 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 20 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Huh, I was 100% postive that wasn't in the source, but now I see it. I even searched the name of the caregiver in the source and it came up with nothing. Oh well. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1198505 of this article has been reviewed by Nascar1996 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 20 March 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Huh, I was 100% postive that wasn't in the source, but now I see it. I even searched the name of the caregiver in the source and it came up with nothing. Oh well. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.