Talk:Dominican comedian Freddy Beras-Goico dies aged 69

Expand slightly, it's missing a few facts

There's room for expansion here:

• What was his TV show called?
• Why did he flee Columbia?
• Where is the funeral taking place?

— μ 19:01, November 18 2010 (UTC)

The article also doesn't say when he actually died! The article is currently unreviewable without that information (and for some reason, the EPR gadget doesn't want to work) — μ 14:53, November 19 2010 (UTC)

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Revision 1130880 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:07, 18 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: "The president of the Dominican Republic, Leonel Fernandez, said that he was a "'mediator of the country's political and social conflicts with his broadcasting and philanthropy.'" No, he didn't. Please, be very careful when using quotes. He may have said such, but the lack of quote marks in the source indicate it is not a direct quote. You are quoting the source and attributing to the President. Furhter, the name of the show is unverified. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

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