Talk:Eleven year-old driver kills family in collision

Review of revision 937438 [Failed]

Revision 937438 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:08, 14 January 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Only one source NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs some copyediting. Also, doesn't say that the driver died, merely implies it by saying someone else was the only survivor Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 937438 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:08, 14 January 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Only one source NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Needs some copyediting. Also, doesn't say that the driver died, merely implies it by saying someone else was the only survivor Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 937593 [Passed]

Revision 937593 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:57, 15 January 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 937593 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:57, 15 January 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.