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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Brianmc in topic Review

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Without putting this up for a formal review, I can say that the article needs a bit of context. Where is this taking place needs to be in the first paragraph and the first sentence if possible. Remember this is an international audience. Also, the title ("English magistrate resigns over Twitter") needs at least one word after Twitter. The title now makes it sound like he used Twitter to resign. Thanks Calebrw (talk) 19:11, 25 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Any better? Computerjoe (talk) 19:20, 25 April 2009 (UTC)Reply
Much. Calebrw (talk) 19:45, 25 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

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--Brian McNeil / talk 07:52, 26 April 2009 (UTC)Reply