Talk:First play after retirement a success for former Czech president

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Revision 113505 of this article has been reviewed by PatrickFlaherty (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:34, 24 September 2008 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Great article! thanks The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

"saw a great success"

Needs more copyediting please. Cirt (talk) 02:51, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, just saw some of the things I missed. I occasionally have a problem with reading things like this and having my mind making the corrections and I don't realize that the sentence is actually wrong. This probably a result of spending most of my life outside of the English speaking world and dealing with non-native speakers. --PatrickFlaherty (talk) 19:02, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Headline

It's awkwardly phrased and Not Every Word Needs to Be Capitalized. Mike Halterman (talk) 07:51, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Renamed, hopefully this will make more sense, and has less caps. --ShakataGaNai ^{^_^} 08:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I thank all, who edited the article. English is not my native language, so although I try to do my best, the articles I write in English have to be controlled.
Just one note to the headline - it seems to me now, that "Leaving" is the first play Havel has written at all - but it is his first play written after he left the presidency (He had written some twenty plays before he became the president). Please, control the meaning and possibly change the title once more, please. Thank you. Okino (talk) 13:39, 25 September 2008 (UTC)