Talk:Garlic bread that turns blue is recalled in Australia

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This article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has failed its review at 07:50, 20 August 2008 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Passed
  • Newsworthiness: Failed: Article doesn't communicate any effect of the recall. Why would someone care it has been recalled?
  • Verifiability: Passed
  • NPOV: Passed
  • Style: Failed: Needs C/E (run on sentence, spelling). Title is confusing (implies garlic bread is already blue)

Comments by reviewer: Country of effect not noted in article. Extremely short article, could use some length. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 07:50, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The article should be switched from {{Review}} to {{Develop}}, if it has not already been done, and these issues should be addressed.

It is recommended that the appropriate templates be added to the article itself, if applicable. This notice should be updated with subsequent reviews.


Reviewed[edit]

This article has been reviewed by DragonFire1024 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:22, 21 August 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

The article may be switched from {{Review}} to {{Publish}}, if it has not already been done.
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