Talk:Google Taiwan: Building knowledge sharing center-stage with innovations

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O have several issues with this article-

  1. Google Page creator has existed for ages
  2. This seems like advertising
  3. This is not news
  4. It sounds like a press release
  5. It was published early
  6. All the sources are to Google or Google Pages

The article was written and published in one edit by an anonymous user who was making his first edit yet --User:Anonymous101 (Talk) 11:51, 23 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

..... Should I try to clean up and re-name b/c this information can be varied and modified after I add information from Taiwan's Press Conference? Brock contact... 15:17, 23 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Thanks for improving it. I take away all my complaints but it's style of writing needs a little improvment before publishing. I also question its neuteral point of view --User:Anonymous101 12:33, 24 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]
BTW of the NPOV, I think its title may be shorten and contents can be C/ed twice before publishing. Just wait for experts. Brock contact... 16:25, 24 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

The first paragraph needs to be about where, when, and why this event (press conference) took place. I do realize the "when" is in the second paragraph. --SVTCobra 21:57, 24 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Paragraph and title changed. Brock contact... 08:35, 25 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

OR info[edit]

I've participated a press conference last Tuesday, Kai-fu Lee said more on the developments of Google in Taiwan, it's differ than other countries. Brock contact... 15:35, 23 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

  • It's still not clear from the article what is actually new here, i.e. what the news is. Uncle G 12:54, 25 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Needs native speaker C/E and title change[edit]

I can't figure out how to title this one, but there's a spelling error in there so unpublished. --Brian McNeil / talk 21:30, 24 December 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]