Talk:Hurricane Beryl to reach Jamaica

Pre-review

Status:    Recommend publish

Version evaluated: 4789068

• Copyright: Passed
• Newsworthiness: Passed
• Verifiability: Passed
• NPOV: Passed
• Style: Passed

Notes for author(s):

I made a bunch of relatively minor changes, which you can see here:[1] Otherwise a great article (and one that will hopefully get published).

Notes for reviewer:

None.

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Me Da Wikipedian (talk) 20:41, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Review of revision 4789307 [Not ready]

Revision 4789307 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:22, 2 July 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: This article is out-of-date, as Beryl has made landfall on Barbados and the Windward Islands as a Category 4 hurricane. This is a frequent problem we run into with weather coverage, and particularly cyclone coverage. I'd recommend, when trying to cover these sorts of things, to try to line up a review beforehand to ensure the article can get out the door in time. Here's a guide to refocusing articles to restore their freshness. Please ensure, when you refresh this, that the lede answers the 5Ws and H — as is frequent, this article as submitted fails to mention the "when" of the focal event. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4789307 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:22, 2 July 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: This article is out-of-date, as Beryl has made landfall on Barbados and the Windward Islands as a Category 4 hurricane. This is a frequent problem we run into with weather coverage, and particularly cyclone coverage. I'd recommend, when trying to cover these sorts of things, to try to line up a review beforehand to ensure the article can get out the door in time. Here's a guide to refocusing articles to restore their freshness. Please ensure, when you refresh this, that the lede answers the 5Ws and H — as is frequent, this article as submitted fails to mention the "when" of the focal event. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.