Talk:Intel launches 45nm "Penryn" processor aiming for energy-efficiency

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Translated some from Chinese, and wrote with what I see at the Press Conference, photo added. Brock contact... 15:49, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

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Hi. Again, please check that I didn't mess up the meaning of anything, a lot of the technical jargon is beyond me. The biggest change I made was to remove the opening of "following success of Intel Developer Forum" which to me seems entirely unrelated and obscures the point of the sentence which is the unveiling of the Penryn. Thanks, --SVTCobra 19:32, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

On the 4th picture, it says "Shullte Co., Ltd FX38 bare bone system motherboard." It should not be "Shullte", but "Shuttle". Please check the image for the verification of my claim. Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.4.77.21 (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2008 (UTC)