Talk:Israel declines appeals to sign Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty

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Review of revision 1031687 [Passed][edit]

The word "spurns" in the title has negative connotations implying disdainful rejection or contemptuous treatment (cf. Webster's dictionary) and this both detracts from the otherwise neutral wording of the content and is simply wrong - the article itself presents reasons that are neither disdainful or contemptuous. The word spurns should be replaced with a more accurate, less emotional and POV word here such as "rejects". PopularMax (talk) 03:26, 30 May 2010 (UTC)

Decline sounds better. Done --Diego Grez return fire 03:29, 30 May 2010 (UTC)