Talk:Italian officials found guilty of abusing G8 protestors
Add topicLatest comment: 16 years ago by SVTCobra in topic Copyvios
not be ready to be published
[edit]- Rename for style,
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- Edit for style and Remove bias
Removed WN:NPOV and restyled
- What in the world are (is?) "Forces of Order". This isn't mentioned anywhere in the article, yet appears in the title. It seems horribly biased to me, if it isn't a specific organization or something. Gopher65talk 04:07, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is meant to mean the forses of the state which includes offices doctors and other staff. It should be changed but I am not able to move the page could you change the title to something like 'Italian officers found guilty of G8 brutality' or something within style guidlines, thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.43.199.196 (talk) 04:28, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
- Or 'Butchers of Genoa' —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.43.199.196 (talk) 04:32, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
- It is meant to mean the forses of the state which includes offices doctors and other staff. It should be changed but I am not able to move the page could you change the title to something like 'Italian officers found guilty of G8 brutality' or something within style guidlines, thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.43.199.196 (talk) 04:28, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
My first news article.
[edit]Any constructive criticism please. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.43.199.196 (talk) 06:01, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
Copyvios
[edit]How many copyvios are in this article? The first source I looked at (The Guardian) contained this:
... were made to join in chants in praise of Italy's late fascist dictator, Benito Mussolini. Another chant, lauding Chile's Augusto Pinochet, ended: "Death to the Jews."
... which appears to have copied directly into this article. --SVTCobra 13:12, 15 July 2008 (UTC)