Talk:Lewis Hamilton wins 2008 Monaco Grand Prix

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formalise[edit]

While it's pretty clear about "copyedit", I'm sorry, what does "formalise" mean? I don't get it... --Yuriybrisk (talk) 06:58, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

The article just seems a little too chatty and informal: "he finished right behind his former teammate", "still a wet track though", "got up 3 places", "dominates over McLaren", etc. --GW_SimulationsUser Page | Talk 07:39, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
reworked a bit and marked as ready --Yuriybrisk (talk) 20:27, 26 May 2008 (UTC)