Talk:Madagascar President resigns, unclear rule in Antananarivo

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Grammar

Could some grammar issues be addressed? This is not a sentence...

• Tourism, especially eco-tourism highlighting the country's rainforests and unique mammal species.

Should given be giving?

• Mr Ravalomanana attempted to hand power over to the heads of the military, given the tasks of discussing and drafting constitutional changes, rather than transfer power to Mr Rajoelina.

70.76.43.200 21:07, 17 March 2009 (UTC)