Talk:Maine resident arrested in Florida for death threats to Bush, Obama

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Both in the title and body I think it should mention the man threatening to kill "Bush and Obama", not "Bush or Obama". If you agree, please change. Wikidsoup (talk) 00:22, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

I see no problem, and the title is better anyway. The Mind's Eye (talk) 00:26, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Factchecked[edit]

--SVTCobra 00:40, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Title[edit]

What the title nows says is that a man is in custody after threatening to kill Bush and Obama while they are in Florida, United States.

I'm not sure what a better title would be, but something along the lines of Man in florida arrested after threats to Bush and Obama, something like that.

Your thoughts, —Calebrw (talk) 01:37, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

I agree, and would have done something a long those lines but really wasn't sure what to pick. The Mind's Eye (talk) 01:39, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
How about "Maine resident arrested in Florida for death threats to Bush, Obama"
PS: MOS says no Bush and Obama, it should be Bush, Obama.
Thoughts on that title? —Calebrw (talk) 01:43, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
Sounds fine, I will implement. The Mind's Eye (talk) 01:46, 8 August 2008 (UTC)