Talk:NASCAR: Edwards wins O'Reilly Auto Parts Challenge, Brad Keselowski clinches Nationwide Series

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Revision 1125161 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:33, 7 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I will be generous and assume the racing teams are correct. I'm going to treat them as 'common knowledge' within the sport (I have done similar for some topic or other - F1? Or was it identifying what the media was refering to in an aviation piece?). Title is still poor but I think it's the best it's ever gonna be. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1125161 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:33, 7 November 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I will be generous and assume the racing teams are correct. I'm going to treat them as 'common knowledge' within the sport (I have done similar for some topic or other - F1? Or was it identifying what the media was refering to in an aviation piece?). Title is still poor but I think it's the best it's ever gonna be. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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The Nationwide Series at the end of the title does not make any sense. Maybe should we add championship again. It would work with the Sprint Cup, because that is also the name for the trophy. Nascar1996 14:23, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

I can;t for the life of me see why not. Nationwide Series is the name of the championship, therefore he won the Nationwide Series, no? Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 15:04, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

I quess, normally the NASCAR world says champioship with it, but it should be okay anyways. They probably understand it. Nascar1996 16:29, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I put the NASCAR: prefix in to help with that. Perhaps using the word 'championship' in the article would ensure any confusion was cleared up? Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 16:34, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

I believe it should go at the end, such as, 'NASCAR: Edwards wins O'Reilly Auto Parts Challenge, Brad Keselowski clinches Nationwide Series championship'. If you don't agree it is okay how it is now. Or we could add 'title' instead of 'championship.' Nascar1996 16:51, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps title could be added, but my concern is the length (already very long for a headline). This very much isn;t my sport so I'll leave you the final decision, but if at all possible I'd urge you to leave it. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 16:53, 7 November 2010 (UTC)

As I said above, if you don't agree it is fine to leave it alone. Nascar1996 16:55, 7 November 2010 (UTC)