Wikinews talk:Briefs/April 18, 2014

From Wikinews, the free news source you can write!
Jump to navigation Jump to search

Pre-review comments[edit]

  • There may be a problem with the FIFA item. It didn't say what it was talking about, so I added some words at the front about FIFA, but you may want to mention what sport it is since some listenders/readers might not know what sport FIFA implies.
  • The words "which is", added to the Westboro Baptist Church item, are just a suggestion; the sentence is kind of long and hard to parse, and it seemed the extra words might be useful. But how you read the lines will make all the difference in how understandable it is.
  • Several recent stories were omitted, including the two most recent — 1, 2, 3, 4. Why, I wonder?

--Pi zero (talk) 16:04, 17 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 2556252 [Passed][edit]