Talk:Obama nominates James Clapper for Director of National Intelligence

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Review of revision 1037759 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1037759 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:51, 6 June 2010 (UTC).[reply]

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  • NPOV: Not ready: Article informs me that Obama is President. Last I looked, Scotland doesn't have a President. President of where? We are an international news source. Obama is not Galactic Overlord.
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Revision 1037759 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:51, 6 June 2010 (UTC).[reply]
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  • NPOV: Not ready: Article informs me that Obama is President. Last I looked, Scotland doesn't have a President. President of where? We are an international news source. Obama is not Galactic Overlord.
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Fixed[edit]

The issues pointed out above are fixed. I think the comments made in the review were very helpful, but since I am a beginner some of the ironic remarks were unneeded. Everybody makes mistakes, no need to be so harsh about them. Thanks Nuburos (talk) 17:28, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'd also like to add that I'm not an American, just if you thought I was an egocentric American.Nuburos (talk) 17:37, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, that was how it came accross to me. Tension has been high in the community over the past few days and I took it out on you. The issues I raised have been fixed. I doubt I have time to do a full review on the remaining stuff, though. Hopefuly it will pass when somebody gets to it. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 19:22, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Hehe, no problem. Guess everybody has some bad days. I'll admit I'm not on one of my best too :) Nuburos (talk) 19:32, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1038571 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1038571 of this article has been reviewed by Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:15, 6 June 2010 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer: That facts for the AP stuff are missing a source.

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Comments by reviewer: That facts for the AP stuff are missing a source.

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Also fixed[edit]

God do I feel stupid. I based much of my expansion of the article on the BBC report... then I forget to add it as a source. My apologies for wasting the reviewer's time. Nuburos (talk) 20:23, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oh there was no problem. I apologize that there have been 20 hours that it was tagged for review. —Mikemoral♪♫ 20:26, 6 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1038580 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1038580 of this article has been reviewed by Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:27, 6 June 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: With the BBC source everything seems fine now.

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Revision 1038580 of this article has been reviewed by Mikemoral (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:27, 6 June 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: With the BBC source everything seems fine now.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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