Talk:Over 100 people die in stampede at Hindu temple near Jodhpur, India

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Lede is misleading, scores, or 113 are not 'hundreds'. Since this also impacts the title I'd like a rewrite of the lede and suggested new title before review occurs. --Brian McNeil / talk 08:46, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Review[edit]

bad work by User:Azamishaque

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--Brian McNeil / talk 09:00, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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