Talk:Pacific Islands Forum condemns Fiji takeover

I think this needs a bit more context, and some rewording to make some things clearer, but I'm too tired to do it ATM. I'm sure someone else will have a go.

In particular,I'm unhappy with this bit:

"The Forum has pressed Fiji for a return to democracy, and in January set a deadline for Fiji to set a date for elections to be held this year"

Basically the Forum wants Fiji to hold elections by the end of this year. Back in January they demanded Fiji name a date by May 1. There has to be a tidier, more elegant way of saying it. --IdiotSavant (talk) 15:08, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

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