Talk:Palestinian president pleads with UN Security Council for help in Gaza

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Headline and style[edit]

It might be just me, but I think the real headline story here is not the diplomatic wordgames, but the planned change on the ground: the humanitarian corridor. This is planned to open an hour from now, so perhaps there is not time to rewrite the article (I can't) so maybe that is an approach for a second article today.

This article is not written in pyramid style, but I don't think that matters considering the speed of changing events, and the diversity of the quotes.

--InfantGorilla (talk) 09:52, 7 January 2009 (UTC)

Review #2[edit]