Talk:Protester killed in West Bank; world reacts to Gaza conflict
Add topicWhat where when who (and why)
[edit]This article does pretty well on the four w's of several protests, except the 'when'. Please go back and add in relevant dates (and times if necessary).
Also please post good sources for the casualty figures, or cite any variation among sources in the body of the article.
--InfantGorilla (talk) 22:44, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
You got most of these, but you didn't tag the article for review. Was that intentional? --InfantGorilla (talk) 00:10, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Merge?
[edit]I think that after a few changes I made, this article is ready for an independent review. However, it might be useful instead if you choose to merge it with an earlier unpublished article contributed by Soapy: UN warns of humanitarian crisis in Gaza. What do you think? --InfantGorilla (talk) 00:10, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Yeah I would merge it with my old one if I could, but I'm afraid I don't know how.Soapy (talk) 01:46, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Your older one is published now, so I no longer think a merge is appropriate. --InfantGorilla (talk) 08:32, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
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