Talk:Qantas grounds all flights in labour dispute

Review of revision 1312193 [Passed]

Revision 1312193 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:11, 30 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Nice work. The only minor detail I had to fix was the use of relative dates - WN articles are fixed against the date of publication, so we use relative dates as opposed to full Month Day, Year where possible. That said, it'd be even better if the union response in the second SMH article were included for improved balance. I'll add that after publication. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1312193 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:11, 30 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Nice work. The only minor detail I had to fix was the use of relative dates - WN articles are fixed against the date of publication, so we use relative dates as opposed to full Month Day, Year where possible. That said, it'd be even better if the union response in the second SMH article were included for improved balance. I'll add that after publication. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.