Talk:Quad crash kills fourteen year-old in County Londonderry, Northern Ireland

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Revision 914672 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:57, 21 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: First sentence of para 2 is slightly awakward. Maybe switch the comma for a full stop? The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.