Talk:Rally organizer arrested in Caledonia, Ontario

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the phrase "the disputed land" in the lead paragraph and on the main page lead synopsis should be changed to something more specific and more informative for readers who have not kept on top of the Caledonia land dispute. perhaps something along the lines of "Two men were arrested for entering the land-holding at the center of a dispute between Native Americans and land developers in Caledonia, Ontario." if a more specific term for the Natives' group, one that is still comprehensible to general (non-local, non-Canadian) readers, can be used can be found, so much the better.  — Doldrums(talk) 04:27, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

I completely agree. From the way the line reads I thought that it was referring to land in Ontario that didn't belong to Canada (which clearly isn't the case). -- 19:46, 19 December 2006 (UTC)