Talk:Ronnie Lee Gardner executed by Utah firing squad
Review of revision 1046337 [Failed][edit]
 |
Revision 1046337 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:25, 18 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Lots copied directly from BBC: "Four of the .30 calibre Winchester rifles were loaded with live bullets but a fifth carried a blank, so that none of the men would have known with certainty that he had shot a lethal round," "Ronnie Lee Gardner had spent his final day watching the Lord of the Rings trilogy and meeting lawyers and clergymen," "Utah Attorney General Mark Shurtleff used the Twitter micro-blogging site to say he had given the go-ahead for execution," etc. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1046337 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:25, 18 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Lots copied directly from BBC: "Four of the .30 calibre Winchester rifles were loaded with live bullets but a fifth carried a blank, so that none of the men would have known with certainty that he had shot a lethal round," "Ronnie Lee Gardner had spent his final day watching the Lord of the Rings trilogy and meeting lawyers and clergymen," "Utah Attorney General Mark Shurtleff used the Twitter micro-blogging site to say he had given the go-ahead for execution," etc. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1046349 [Failed][edit]
| |
Revision 1046349 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:22, 18 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Multiple issues: Repeated sections. Bad source templates -- could use another high-quality source instead the Time one. Jan. 26, 1996 instead of January 25th, 1996 Title: just one squad, not squads Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1046349 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:22, 18 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Multiple issues: Repeated sections. Bad source templates -- could use another high-quality source instead the Time one. Jan. 26, 1996 instead of January 25th, 1996 Title: just one squad, not squads Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1047206 [Passed][edit]
 |
Revision 1047206 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 08:08, 20 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1047206 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 08:08, 20 June 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |