Talk:Sharapova defeats Azarenka in Porsche Finale

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Review of revision 1485187 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1485187 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:01, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not ready: At least one passage, talking about collecting the car, is too close to a source.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: There's a lot of stuff not in the sources here. For instance, neither source discusses Radwanska (incidentally, I couldn't understand that bit of the article and hoped to clarify it from the sources). I couldn't confirm the French Open is a clay court. I can't find anything about the 26 victories, or the Sony Ericsson Open, or the prize money. I stopped there but be warned there might be other unverified stuff as well.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1485187 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:01, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not ready: At least one passage, talking about collecting the car, is too close to a source.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not ready: There's a lot of stuff not in the sources here. For instance, neither source discusses Radwanska (incidentally, I couldn't understand that bit of the article and hoped to clarify it from the sources). I couldn't confirm the French Open is a clay court. I can't find anything about the 26 victories, or the Sony Ericsson Open, or the prize money. I stopped there but be warned there might be other unverified stuff as well.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Passed

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.


  • Appears that clay court was addressed in this article: Victoria Azarenka waltzes into final

Bddpaux (talk) 16:01, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hopefully the whole lot is addressed now; the author's changed the sources used. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 16:04, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1485583 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1485583 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:23, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: "Interestingly enough" doesn't quite fit with NPOV....this article is almost ready! Tighten up that last paragraph and its there! Bddpaux (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 1485583 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:23, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: "Interestingly enough" doesn't quite fit with NPOV....this article is almost ready! Tighten up that last paragraph and its there! Bddpaux (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Review of revision 1485606 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1485606 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:08, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I skirted the line a little bit on the amount of editing I did on that last paragraph. Bddpaux (talk) 19:08, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 1485606 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:08, 30 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I skirted the line a little bit on the amount of editing I did on that last paragraph. Bddpaux (talk) 19:08, 30 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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