Talk:Shooting in German hospital, four killed

Review of revision 1097957 [Failed]

Revision 1097957 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:34, 20 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: This article claims she shot four people in the hospital then died. The sources indicate two were found dead in the fire near the hospital (possibly shot first), then shot one more person inside the hospital. That makes three. The fourth death was herself. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1097957 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:34, 20 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: This article claims she shot four people in the hospital then died. The sources indicate two were found dead in the fire near the hospital (possibly shot first), then shot one more person inside the hospital. That makes three. The fourth death was herself. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

• Yes, I thought that was obvious ... --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 13:56, 20 September 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1098207 [Passed]

Revision 1098207 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:07, 20 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1098207 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:07, 20 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Picture

This revert is irreproducible. I replaced a symbol picture by a new picture showing the crime scene. This article reports of the crime first of all and not of hospital building. I request to put the this File:Tatort - Amoklauf Lörrach4.jpg picture back which I replaced and User:Microchip08 checked. Greeting from Lörrach --Taxiarchos228 (talk) 21:04, 20 September 2010 (UTC)

I'm happy to have it back, but can you demonstrate that it is in fact the building in question? It looks very different from the file photo. You've only this contribution both here and on de.Wikinews; are you active/trusted on other wikis? That would help satisfy my concerns. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 21:06, 20 September 2010 (UTC)

Sure, the image shows the Elisabethen Hospital one day after the running amok. When you look through the passageway you can see the green letters (cf. this picture[1]). You can also see the white balcony of the old building File:Elisabethen-Krankenhaus Lörrach, Klinikbau.jpg --Taxiarchos228 (talk) 08:34, 21 September 2010 (UTC)

• I don't think it is necessary to put a "current" photo of the hospital. It does not change much the fact that the people is already getting an idea of how looks the hospital, and the "new" one just looks too centered on one place. --Diego Grez ^{return fire} 21:09, 20 September 2010 (UTC)
  • And I don't think it is necessary to use a picture of the building when there are picture of the crime scene [2] The content of the article is not the Saint Elizabeth Hospital but the crime happend there. --Taxiarchos228 (talk) 08:34, 21 September 2010 (UTC)