Talk:Silent film actress Anita Page dies at age 98

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Revision 689943 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:01, 8 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Needs that small bit of re-write - otherwise looks good. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 02:01, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 689943 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:01, 8 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Needs that small bit of re-write - otherwise looks good. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 02:01, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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I've fixed a few sentences, and cut down a couple of uses of "she" where I could. Ready for re-review. Chris Mann (Say hi!|Stalk me!) 03:36, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Review 2[edit]

Revision 689977 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I suppose that works --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 07:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 689977 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I suppose that works --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 07:15, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Category improvement[edit]

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Instead of "Category:Acting", I think "Category:Actors" is a better category. Van der Hoorn (talk) 18:11, 15 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done ♪Tempo di Valse ♪ 18:55, 15 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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