Talk:Sony recalls 440,000 laptops due to wiring faults
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Revision 688524 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:26, 4 September 2008 (UTC).
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Revision 688524 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:26, 4 September 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Interesting. Fact-checked. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- How many laptops were recalled? The title says 440k, the article says 400k. Also note there is no paragraphs and the article fails to mention the fact that people were burned due to this issue - which I think is a fairly large omission. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 17:31, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed the recall number. I have made the pragraphs longer. The article does mention burns - "Sony has received 209 reports of overheating worldwide, and one customer has reported receiving minor burns." Anonymous101talk 17:34, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Cool. You win on the burns - I'm blind. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 17:37, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed the recall number. I have made the pragraphs longer. The article does mention burns - "Sony has received 209 reports of overheating worldwide, and one customer has reported receiving minor burns." Anonymous101talk 17:34, 4 September 2008 (UTC)